Thursday, September 24, 2009
The friend Chapter 5
Tuesday, September 22, 2009
The Friends Chapter 4
In canteen
People talk to each other
People are eating
Four student duing their work
No teacher in the room
I think to obervation people is very easy and nothing wrong, because is the people was doing everyday just we don't know.
Monday, September 14, 2009
My 6 Grade
Thursday, September 10, 2009
Summary of Our Only May Amlia
This story is talking about a twelve years old girl, May Amelia, she has seven elder brothers, May Amelia is the youngest, but the baby is on the way her father Jalmer and her mother Alma come from Finland to live in America, and charge their name to Jackson, Mamma ha a sister Alice, and Papa has a sister Feenie who married to Henry who is a sailor, they have no children. The Jackson family live on the Nasel River in Washington, the story begin in 1899. It is May’s birthday but Papa was mean to her so she went off to Baby Island, where her brother, Wilbert, finds her. They were going to fish for salmon, but Boise, the dog, that the fish go. When they get home Aunt Alice and Aunt Feenie here, Aunt Feenie gives her a baby doll, before May goes to sleep, she wish for a baby sister.
Wednesday, September 2, 2009
Summary of Classification stories
I most like the second story, because it write more detail, that help us to understand the foods are how delicious or how terrible, like the pork is so sweet that is reminds you of candy, it was really funny, this kind of writing skill definitive can help my writing.
Wednesday, August 26, 2009
The Tell-Tale Heart
This story is writing about a young man, who kills an old man, because the man says he hated the old man's eyes, but I thought he was crazy. First day at night, the man was went in the old man's bedroom and looked at him; the man still not woke up. The man is still doing like this for a week, at the last night the man opened the door again the only different is this time the man make a loud noise, the old man work up and felt scared, he was cried very loud, his heartbeat become faster and faster finally he was die, the young man take a knife to cut off the old man's arms and legs and hidden it , then the bell ring three polices was came in to asked him why have a lot of noise, the young man didn't feel nervous, he let the polices came in and start talk with them, he began felt nervous and start spoke louder because he heard the old man's heartbeat, finally the man collapsed, he pulls up the floor boards and shows the polices the body of the old man, I believe finally the polices took him.